Grace
I like the comparison of the color white to a medical ward/hospital, i wouldn't have thought of that!

I used to love watching super hero cartoons, reading about you watching them brought back a few memories

Wow, that was a twist, i was not expecting that to happen just from touching the shells!
                                                                          Amethyst


I like the line about the fire pushing away the cold night, I can see myself sitting at a fire and looking out into a dark chilly night. Very good!
I like the part about the cat, i remember when my cat was a kitten, she'd never stop wondering around
I really like this piece, when I read about Chris Kyle's PTSD, he lost control quite a few times too. It really can make people violent in bad cases
                                                                                                  Sydnee
the comparison between your heart and pounding drums was unique, very descriptive

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